I have something to say…
No lie, last thing I want to do is shout.
I would prefer doing it in a seductive whisper real close to your ear so the vibration adds to its power.
If I have your attention please perk your ears.
Words from the heart have power if delivered in a mighty yell or hushed tone.
Truth of the matter…my tongue can give pleasure beyond compare but it can also be used as a blade. I do either or as long as my point is made.
Lucky you…today I chose to keep it in my sheath and just purr.
I really don’t want to inflict any fatal blows to y’all’s egos. But my hand is flexing and temper is about to blow.
I am a woman…not a ho
I have needs, just like you
If one need is not met
Don’t be rude just because
I’m smart enough to take
Gifts and cash instead
Ya shoulda paid what was due
Please pass to every bro
my tongue can give pleasure beyond compare but it can also be used as a blade. I do either or as long as my point is made.
Lucky you…today I chose to keep it in my sheath and just purr.
Please spread the word.
I really don’t want to inflict any fatal blows to y’all’s egos. But my hand is flexing and temper is about to blow.
Could y’all try to vary the tones of your literary voice so your points are not lost in all that noise?
We all know you got talent and have something to say from your own unique point of view…stand down for a moment from trying to prove it.
If you constantly feel like you have to fight to gain ground in your lyrical aspirations, remember ground is only gained on any field with offense plays. Offense is benched if defense is always played…and eventually tires and ground will be lost.
We are all friends here. Don’t write like we are foes. Try new things and saying your thoughts in new ways.
The real world is hard and won’t give a shit about you and your talent until it is fine tuned and refined.
Let us help each other to do just that. Check your egos at the lounge door and stop trying to prove your worth…instead use it to improve your worth.
You will be better for it.
For sure